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hiii my names aurther and am gona be telling a story😅

soo it was a day like anyother i was doing the usual dishes and house work when i go out to like just look around cause home looks great after i cleaned and stuff then out of no where i hear a sound ands like in abush soo run cause am super creeped out

LATER that vening we were washing the dogs then the dogs ren and started barcking at the wall and then my dads ltells me to move backwards cause drumm roll please dum dum dummmmmm !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was a snake it was white dont know wat type it is but i was creepet out soo we called the gardener and him and my dad tried to scar the snake away or kill it { no offence snake lovers ]} but it was him or us soo the snake runs away and luckly no one got injured including the snake soo evry thing was fin

BASED ON A TRUE STORY

MORAL = dont go to dark bushes alone if your not an adult and german shepards can sense danger

HOPE YALL ENJOYED MY STORY AN

HAPPY HALOWEEN !!!!😀

Tiffi 👧who went trick-or-treating🍬 on Halloween.🎃
Dressed as a ghost
and when they finished trick-or-treating he went home 🏠
with his father mr. Toffee
 Later he had dinner 🍽️
and tiffi and he went to his room
and fell asleep.

When I was asleep 💤
I hear a noise
and woke up very startled, 😮
looked under the bed🛏️
and he was a giant,
but it was just him
Yeti who happened to give him
sweets ... 🍬🍬🍬

 The end

TRICK OR TREAT

Halloween is here again, so Tiffi in her princess costume and Yeti in his ghost costume go out to trick or treat. In the neighborhood walking up the garden path Tiffi and Yeti spy a yummy sweet. Knock - knock and Tiffi and Yeti yell trick or trick.

oky soo wat did anyone think of my story and just give it right at i can take the positive critisisi